谁帮忙翻译一段英文，多谢多谢

果子

随着2008年奥运会临近，餐饮的质量及安全状况越来越受到社会各界热心关注。人们普遍认为，奥运会既是向世界展示中国饮食文化的窗口，更是提升我国餐饮业服务水平的好机会。文章谈到了奥运会的成功举办将给旅游行业在饮食安全上带来新的挑战和压力，深刻地剖析了目前北京饮食业存在的问题，借鉴往届奥运会饮食安全的成功经验，提出了确保北京奥运会食品安全的十项措施。


翻译成英文

yzndomon100

The Olympic Games approach along with 2008,The dining quality and the security condition more and more receive the social from all walks of life warm-hearted attention.The people generally believed,The Olympic Games since approach the world to demonstrate the Chinese diet culture the window,Is promotes our country dining industry service level the good opportunity.The article will talk about Olympic Games' success to conduct gives the traveling profession to bring the new challenge and the pressure in the diet security,Profoundly analyzed the present Beijing catering business existence question,Model former years Olympic Games diet security success experience,Proposed guarantees the Beijing Olympic Games food security ten measures.


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我什么都不知道（找别人翻的）




With the 2008 Olympic Games approaching,The dining quality and the security condition more and more receive the social of enthusiastic community concern.It is generally considered that both the Olympic Games to show the world of Chinese food culture's window,more to improve our country catering Industry service levels for a good opportunity.The article talk about the Olympic Games' success to be held will bring the new challenge and the pressure in the diet security of the Tourism industry,Profoundly analyzed Beijing catering business existence the question at the moment,Use the sucessful experience of the previous Olympic Games in the diet security  for reference and to ensure the diet security of ten measures in the diet security


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绿的是修改后的~~~（自己修改的= =。。不要BS我）

[ 本帖最后由 yzndomon100 于 2008-5-4 19:19 编辑 ]

dormouse

支持你······直译啊···呵呵
无章法

yzndomon100

在看看咯~~~呵呵

morron

With the approaching of 2008 Olympic Games, the food quality and its safety have been given more and more concerns from the social communities. People all believe that the Olympic  is not only a stage for China to indroduce chinese food culture, but also can be a better chance to improve the standards of restaurant service. In this passage, it covers the new challenges and difficulties on food safety in tourism industry, which are brought by holding a successful Olympic Games. Then there will be a deeper analysis on the present problems that exist in food industry of Beijing, after all it will also talk about some great experience that the previous Olympics have to the safety of food. At the conclusion, the passage will address top ten measures on food safety to ensure a big success of Beijing Olympic Games.

blyr8282

原帖由 yzndomon100 于 2008-5-4 09:39 发表
The Olympic Games approach along with 2008,The dining quality and the security condition more and more receive the social from all walks of life warm-hearted attention.The people generally believed,Th ...

宝宝猪翻译是用网上软件翻译的吧,还说叫别人翻的,一看就看出来了

yzndomon100

原帖由 blyr8282 于 2008-5-5 20:43 发表



宝宝猪翻译是用网上软件翻译的吧,还说叫别人翻的,一看就看出来了

绿色滴是我自己翻的（当然也包括查询。。我没那能力翻译这么强大的文章）。。。黑的是我直接从别人那里拿来滴